From 4957cc2441c3c34da1e8174e908e48f3a0473b12 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nixinova <42429413+Nixinova@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 28 May 2021 23:14:30 +1200
Subject: [PATCH] Copyedit coding habits plugin (#337)

---
 source/app/web/statics/about/index.html      |  2 +-
 source/templates/classic/partials/habits.ejs | 16 ++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/app/web/statics/about/index.html b/source/app/web/statics/about/index.html
index e8da6d82..ba531065 100644
--- a/source/app/web/statics/about/index.html
+++ b/source/app/web/statics/about/index.html
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
           <section class="container" v-if="(account.type === 'user')&&(habits)">
             <h2>
               <svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" viewBox="0 0 16 16" width="16" height="16"><path fill-rule="evenodd" d="M6 2a.75.75 0 01.696.471L10 10.731l1.304-3.26A.75.75 0 0112 7h3.25a.75.75 0 010 1.5h-2.742l-1.812 4.528a.75.75 0 01-1.392 0L6 4.77 4.696 8.03A.75.75 0 014 8.5H.75a.75.75 0 010-1.5h2.742l1.812-4.529A.75.75 0 016 2z"></path></svg>
-              Average commits per day over the last week
+              Average commits at each hour over the last week
             </h2>
             <div class="chart-bars">
               <div class="entry" v-for="h in 24">
diff --git a/source/templates/classic/partials/habits.ejs b/source/templates/classic/partials/habits.ejs
index 89927995..4c88add4 100644
--- a/source/templates/classic/partials/habits.ejs
+++ b/source/templates/classic/partials/habits.ejs
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   <section>
     <h2 class="field">
       <svg xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" viewBox="0 0 16 16" width="16" height="16"><path fill-rule="evenodd" d="M8 1.5c-2.363 0-4 1.69-4 3.75 0 .984.424 1.625.984 2.304l.214.253c.223.264.47.556.673.848.284.411.537.896.621 1.49a.75.75 0 01-1.484.211c-.04-.282-.163-.547-.37-.847a8.695 8.695 0 00-.542-.68c-.084-.1-.173-.205-.268-.32C3.201 7.75 2.5 6.766 2.5 5.25 2.5 2.31 4.863 0 8 0s5.5 2.31 5.5 5.25c0 1.516-.701 2.5-1.328 3.259-.095.115-.184.22-.268.319-.207.245-.383.453-.541.681-.208.3-.33.565-.37.847a.75.75 0 01-1.485-.212c.084-.593.337-1.078.621-1.489.203-.292.45-.584.673-.848.075-.088.147-.173.213-.253.561-.679.985-1.32.985-2.304 0-2.06-1.637-3.75-4-3.75zM6 15.25a.75.75 0 01.75-.75h2.5a.75.75 0 010 1.5h-2.5a.75.75 0 01-.75-.75zM5.75 12a.75.75 0 000 1.5h4.5a.75.75 0 000-1.5h-4.5z"></path></svg>
-      Coding habits and recent activity
+      Recent coding habits
     </h2>
     <% if (plugins.habits.facts) { %>
       <div class="row">
@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@
         <% } else { %>
           <ul class="habits">
             <% if (plugins.habits.indents.style) { %>
-              <li>Use <%= plugins.habits.indents.style %> for indents</li>
+              <li>Uses <%= plugins.habits.indents.style %> for indentation</li>
             <% } %>
             <% if (plugins.habits.lines.average.chars) { %>
-              <li>Approximately <%= f(plugins.habits.lines.average.chars, {fixed:1}) %> characters per line of code written</li>
+              <li>Has approximately <%= f(plugins.habits.lines.average.chars, {fixed:1}) %> characters per line of code written</li>
             <% } %>
             <% if (!Number.isNaN(plugins.habits.commits.hour)) { %>
-              <li>Mostly push code around <%= plugins.habits.commits.hour %>:00</li>
+              <li>Mostly pushes code around <%= plugins.habits.commits.hour %>:00</li>
             <% } %>
             <% if (plugins.habits.commits.day) { %>
-              <li>Mostly active on <%= plugins.habits.commits.day.toLocaleLowerCase() %></li>
+              <li>Mostly active on <%= plugins.habits.commits.day %></li>
             <% } %>
           </ul>
         <% } %>
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
   <% if (plugins.habits.charts) { %>
     <% if (!Number.isNaN(plugins.habits.commits.hour)) { %>
       <section class="column chart largeable">
-        <h3>Commit activity per time of the day</h3>
+        <h3>Commit activity per hour of day</h3>
         <div class="chart-bars">
           <% for (let h = 0; h < 24; h++) { const p = (plugins.habits.commits.hours[h]??0)/(plugins.habits.commits.hours.max??1); %>
             <div class="entry">
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     <div class="row largeable">
       <% if (!Number.isNaN(plugins.habits.commits.day)) { %>
         <section class="column chart">
-          <h3>Commit activity per day</h3>
+          <h3>Commit activity per day of week</h3>
           <div class="chart-bars">
             <% for (let d = 0; d < 7; d++) { const p = (plugins.habits.commits.days[d]??0)/(plugins.habits.commits.days.max??1); %>
               <div class="entry">
@@ -80,4 +80,4 @@
       <% } %>
     </div>
   <% } %>
-<% } %>
\ No newline at end of file
+<% } %>